The heat rises from my body
I see the crystal cool water softley rolling on the beach,
This thing inside my head known to be my mind tells me "go and be refreshed"
As i step into the soothing water,
It runs through my toes and washes the sand off the tops of my smooth feet
The sun reflects from the mirrored water onto my golden skin
My body emerges into the sea of exquisitness
Chills run through my body
And i feel as if i am no longer in my body but a part of the sea
2 comments:
this is awesome! i LOVED how you were talking about the warm sand, but then crossed over to the water and being refreshed. this poem was really good and descriptive, and i'm so excited to read the rest!
wow..that is really excellent! By the way you described it, I can almost feel the sand on my feet and the water washing it away.
Loved it!
<3 Lucy
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